The Power of Influence in Writing

            How can you write about something you don’t know or have never experienced? It isn’t an easy task. Most authors are influenced by what they see happening in the world or by close personal experiences. These influences lead a writer to create a piece of text that is emotional, thought-provoking, and encouraging change. In the three poems studied, ‘In Flanders Fields’, ‘No Shelter’, and ‘Television’, all three authors have created pieces of prose that relays to the audience what they saw or experienced and encourages future action to rectify the problems.

            In the poem, ‘In Flanders Fields’, John McCrae illustrates in vivid detail the sorrows of war and the experiences of fallen soldiers. He wrote this poem because his close friend was killed in combat during the First World War. The speaker(s) of the poem are the dead soldiers. He shows a respect for the dead soldier by capitalizing the word ‘Dead’, which reveals his own personal respect for dead soldiers. The poem ends with the Dead encouraging the soldiers to carry on and continue fighting the enemy. One can assume that McCrae ended the poem with this plea because he personally believed the war should continue and those soldiers that died should not have died in vain. John McCrae took a personal experience and created an emotional piece of text that encourages the audience to keep fighting and to honour the dead by keeping their memory alive.

            Roald Dahl’s poem ‘Television’ was written during the rise of popularity for the television. He saw that children were being babysat by televisions, not reading anymore and that children’s imaginations were getting smaller and less imaginative. In the poem, Dahl encourages parents to get rid of the TV and give their children books. He discusses how the television corrupts children’s minds, kills their imagination, and how their brains begin to rust. Dahl was read to by his own parents quite a bit, and so he personally believed it was important for children to read. He saw that children were losing their ability to use their own imagination! He pleads with the parents to throw the TV out and replace the television with books. The children may not like it at first, but they will grow so bored that they will eventually pick up a book and start reading. Dahl`s passionate plea reveals that he was influenced by what he saw happening during the rise of popularity after the invention of the TV.

            Rage Against the Machine (RATM) was a band known for writing songs addressing political and social issues. They were highly influenced by the things they saw happening in society. In the song ‘No Shelter’, the band describes how society is being manipulated by big business and how badly society is being driven by greed and money. RATM compares the influence of mass media over the general population to the concept of war: ‘There’ll be no shelter here!/The frontline is everywhere.’ RATM doesn’t explicitly say to fight against the media and big business. They use a sort of rhetorical argument to encourage people to stand up to the media and big business by saying,

American eyes, American eyes
View the world from American eyes
Bury the past, rob us blind
And leave nothing behind

Just stare
Just stare
Just stare
Just stare

And live the nightmare!

Through this style of reverse psychology, RATM is trying to encourage the audience to stand up against the mass media and big business. They allude to the idea that big business and the media steal consumers’ money and take the public’s attention off  real world problems. RATM took what they saw happening to the American public and wrote this song to bring to light the problem with mass media influence and big business stealing money. Writing songs like this is a way for the band to vocalize their political views and opinions, and spreading them nationwide.

            Through these three selected poems, the authors revealed how they were influenced by personal observations and experiences. In these texts, the authors used their emotional connection to the problems they saw and were able to plead with the audience to take some form of action against the enemy; whether the enemy was the media, big business, a dictator, or the television.  

 
Television

The most important thing we've learned,
So far as children are concerned,
Is never, NEVER, NEVER let
Them near your television set --
Or better still, just don't install
The idiotic thing at all.
In almost every house we've been,
We've watched them gaping at the screen.
They loll and slop and lounge about,
And stare until their eyes pop out.
(Last week in someone's place we saw
A dozen eyeballs on the floor.)
They sit and stare and stare and sit
Until they're hypnotised by it,
Until they're absolutely drunk
With all that shocking ghastly junk.
Oh yes, we know it keeps them still,
They don't climb out the window sill,
They never fight or kick or punch,
They leave you free to cook the lunch
And wash the dishes in the sink --
But did you ever stop to think,
To wonder just exactly what
This does to your beloved tot?
IT ROTS THE SENSE IN THE HEAD!
IT KILLS IMAGINATION DEAD!
IT CLOGS AND CLUTTERS UP THE MIND!
IT MAKES A CHILD SO DULL AND BLIND
HE CAN NO LONGER UNDERSTAND
A FANTASY, A FAIRYLAND!
HIS BRAIN BECOMES AS SOFT AS CHEESE!
HIS POWERS OF THINKING RUST AND FREEZE!
HE CANNOT THINK -- HE ONLY SEES!
'All right!' you'll cry. 'All right!' you'll say,
'But if we take the set away,
What shall we do to entertain
Our darling children? Please explain!'
We'll answer this by asking you,
'What used the darling ones to do?
'How used they keep themselves contented
Before this monster was invented?'
Have you forgotten? Don't you know?
We'll say it very loud and slow:
THEY ... USED ... TO ... READ! They'd READ and READ,
AND READ and READ, and then proceed
To READ some more. Great Scott! Gadzooks!
One half their lives was reading books!
The nursery shelves held books galore!
Books cluttered up the nursery floor!
And in the bedroom, by the bed,
More books were waiting to be read!
Such wondrous, fine, fantastic tales
Of dragons, gypsies, queens, and whales
And treasure isles, and distant shores
Where smugglers rowed with muffled oars,
And pirates wearing purple pants,
And sailing ships and elephants,
And cannibals crouching 'round the pot,
Stirring away at something hot.
(It smells so good, what can it be?
Good gracious, it's Penelope.)
The younger ones had Beatrix Potter
With Mr. Tod, the dirty rotter,
And Squirrel Nutkin, Pigling Bland,
And Mrs. Tiggy-Winkle and-
Just How The Camel Got His Hump,
And How the Monkey Lost His Rump,
And Mr. Toad, and bless my soul,
There's Mr. Rat and Mr. Mole-
Oh, books, what books they used to know,
Those children living long ago!
So please, oh please, we beg, we pray,
Go throw your TV set away,
And in its place you can install
A lovely bookshelf on the wall.
Then fill the shelves with lots of books,
Ignoring all the dirty looks,
The screams and yells, the bites and kicks,
And children hitting you with sticks-
Fear not, because we promise you
That, in about a week or two
Of having nothing else to do,
They'll now begin to feel the need
Of having something to read.
And once they start -- oh boy, oh boy!
You watch the slowly growing joy
That fills their hearts. They'll grow so keen
They'll wonder what they'd ever seen
In that ridiculous machine,
That nauseating, foul, unclean,
Repulsive television screen!
And later, each and every kid
Will love you more for what you did.

Roald Dahl

Source: http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/television/
 
In Flanders Fields

In Flanders fields the poppies blow
Between the crosses, row on row,
That mark our place; and in the sky
The larks, still bravely singing, fly
Scarce heard amid the guns below.


We are the Dead. Short days ago
We lived, felt dawn, saw sunset glow,
Loved, and were loved, and now we lie
In Flanders fields.


Take up our quarrel with the foe:
To you from failing hands we throw
The torch; be yours to hold it high.
If ye break faith with us who die
We shall not sleep, though poppies grow
In Flanders fields.


- John McCrae

Source: http://www.veterans.gc.ca/eng/history/firstwar/vimy/vimy1a
 
No Shelter by Rage Against the Machine

The main attraction, distraction
got ya number than number than numb
Empty ya pockets son, they got you thinkin that
What ya need is what they sellin
Make you think that buyin is rebellin'
From the theaters to malls on every shore
The thin line between entertainment and war
The frontline is everywhere, there be no shelter here

Spielberg the nightmare works so push it far
Amistad was a whip, the truth feather to tar
Memories erased and burned to scar
Trade in ya history for a VCR

Cinema, simulated life, ill drama
Fourth reich culture, Americana
Chained to the dream they got ya searchin for
The thin line between entertainment and war

There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere

Hospitals not profit full
The market bull's got pockets full
To advertise some hip disguise
View the world from American eyes
Tha poor adore keep feeding for more
Tha thin line between entertainment and war
fix the need, develop the taste
Buy the products or get laid to waste
Coca-Cola was back in the veins in Saigon
In Rambo 2, he got a dope pair of Nikes on
Godzilla pure motherfuckin' filler
Get your eyes off the real killer

Cinema, simulated life, ill drama
Fourth reich culture, Americana
Chained to the dream they got you searchin for
Tha thin line between entertainment and war

There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere
There'll be no shelter here!
The frontline is everywhere

American eyes, American eyes
View the world from American eyes
Bury the past, rob us blind
And leave nothin behind

American eyes, American eyes
View the world from American eyes
Bury the past, rob us blind
And leave nothin behind

Just stare!
Just stare!
Just stare!
Just stare!

and live the nightmare!

Source: http://www.sing365.com/music/lyric.nsf/NO-SHELTER-lyrics-Rage-Against-The-Machine/B68F7CC1AADB7D9D482568A50015D22B